My heart pounded. Butterfly's filled my belly. I was finally going ice skating! I have been begging mum to let me go for ever and ever.
I grabbed some size 4 skates and off I went before falling on my bum ... and getting back up again. After a while got the hang of it. I was zooming around. We hired a stand thing that you could go with someone on it. I asked lily and Caitlin if they wanted to come around with me.
I HAD LOTS OF FUN!!!!!!!
I love the way you have started your story. Great sentence structure that really hooks me in!
ReplyDeleteButterfly in your story is plural (more than 1). We have just learnt the rule to change a word ending in'y' to plural. Do you think you can correct your spelling in this recount ...
I am looking forward to reading your next piece of creative writing!!
Mrs F